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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 08:27, 17 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:27, 17 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

  • Be sure sure capitalize Kings of Scotland and Abbot of Battle Abbey.
  • Missing commas Roger de Pont L'Évêque the Archbishop of York, Gilbert Foliot the Bishop of London, Josceline de Bohon the Bishop of Salisbury, Gervase de Cornhill the Sheriff of Kent
  • I'm pretty sure in this sort of case, leaving the commas out is correct, otherwise we'd be implying that there were eight other people involved, not four. To prevent confusion, I've gone with "Roger de Pont L'Évêque - the Archbishop of York, Gilbert Foliot - the Bishop of London, Josceline de Bohon - the Bishop of Salisbury, Gervase de Cornhill - the Sheriff of Kent"
  • No fancy effigy or anything on his tomb, if he even has one?